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| موضوع: Lord of the Rings: The Rosalian Warrior الأحد يوليو 08, 2012 12:08 pm | |
| Authors note: Okay, this is completely rewritten chapter of 'The Rosalian Warrior' For those who are still reading I thank you. I've (hopefully) erased all the other chapters and the note to put this up. I'm sorry to those who liked the older version, but if this is more to your liking YAY! So anyways, I just wanted to say that there are quite a few changes that were made in this story after I sat down and really thought of her story. Also, with reading the first Lord of the Rings book I found that there was a LOT of time that skips throughout the entire story and realized I could use that to my advantage! Also! NO BLONDE BOROMIR! :3 I'm going to be trying to not follow all the stereotypes of characters that I have seen while reading fanfiction. For one Boromir defiantly isn't a sex-crazed maniac, nor is he a COMPLETE pompous idiot. Also, no more Legolas bashing. I actually LIKE him in the book so far, also he didn't really come off as the sort of person that was some sort of big ladies man. He seemed far more interested in tree's and Gimli then the opposite sex. Aragorn (I realized I had wrote Aragon more then once. I feel like a doofus) will be a bit moody, cuz he is in the book. And our favorite (my favorite) Gimli will be just as he is in both the book and movie! No prologue either. Arathaiens official backstory will be written bit by bit throughout the story. She's also changed in appearance a bit. That was a lonnnggg note….okay BACK TO THE REAL STORY! I don't own any other character except Arathaien and Derin. Chapter one She stood situated on top of one of the many orcs that had hindered her journey, her dark red wavy hair having tumbled out of its barrettes and shone almost carroty in the morning sun. Her round dark onyx eyes kept a mischievous gleam within them even after battle and they slowly shifted as three voices sprang out from the forests depths. She knew the voices well and she awaited for the arrival of the three dwarves Gloin, Gimli, and Derin. They were her guardians since birth, and she lionized them since the day she could remember. Gloin was a brutal combatant, having long ago traveled to the Lonely Mountain with the twelve companions and helped slay the creature Smaug. Though, being a fierce warrior did not make him unkind of cruel. In fact, he would spend many nights with the young girl telling her stories of the outside world she had never seen. The Gloin was her companion, but also in many ways her father. And as a playmate the cheeky girl preformed her mischievous acts upon him. Often the young red-head, in her earlier years, would take the dwarf lords' shining trinkets and hide them within the confines of the mountainside watching till his face would turn blue with rage and confusion till he found his precious items. Gimli was much like his father Gloin in personality and likeness. Though he was not as grey as his father he often acted like the old dwarf. He was the brother the pale-skinned fighter had never had and she found his company much more appealing when Gloin was angry with her. The younger dwarf was her teacher in the arts of combat, and his blunt way of fighting had seemed to rub off on her. Last of all there was Derin, the youngest of the three dwarves. He was the womans' first true friend outside of Gloin and Gimli. Derin was a terribly shy dwarf and did not like to speak much, and perhaps that was the reason they became quick friends. He had been training under Gimli longer then the girl had but was clumsier with his attacks so in a few ways the young woman excelled ahead in the ways of fighting then dwarf warrior. He was considering on becoming a blacksmith, and the claymore the young woman carried proved his fine craftsmanship. "Arathaien!" the raspy voice vibrated from deep within the throat of Gloin. The maiden turned and felt her smile broaden as the other two dwarves caught up with him, "What do you think you are doin' here?" he asked. His face was sweaty, dirt clung to the tanned sagging skin of the dwarf lord as his dark eyes glared at the young woman before him. Arathain turned herself completely toward the trio and gracefully hopped down off the chest of the orc with a satisfying 'plop'. A pale hand shifted wavy locks over her right shoulders as she approached them in a cool manner, "Come now Gloin, we both know after so many years that ya should never ask why I be thinkin'," she chided. "But, dearest friend, I will tell you why I am here if you'd like to know," she pursed her pale lips as her coal eyes traveled down over the heads of the three dwarves. She was much taller then all of them, standing at a height of 5'7. She came to the conclusion at an early age that she was but simply an overgrown mutated dwarf maiden. Excluding the beard of course. "Well then?" Gimli inquired keeping a plump red hand over his axe's handle. "I am worried for Balin just as you all are," she stated curtly, her expression becoming serious, "I also wish to come to the council you seek with this Elrond of Rivendell. Also," the cheeky smile began to return, "Have I ever been known to give up a chance for an adventure?" she asked and Gloin sighed deeply running his fingers through his grey braided beard. He seemed exhausted. The years were wearing him down and this journey to Rivendell had been a long one, Gloin was quite impressed with his young gal for making it this far. "Son, we cannot send her back alone can we?" He asked. "No, I dare say we can't." Grumbled Gimli slapping the front of the girls thigh with the back of his left hand, "You ridiculous girl! I told ya before I left I'd tell you about the journey when I came back!" "I don't mean to sound childish but that just isn't enough any more Gimli!" She spoke in her deep voice, "I want to see the great valleys and the dangerous forests, not just hear about them! No one ever accomplish anything by staying with their nanny helping clean the house and cooking the food!" Gloin eyed her, "Okay, they didn't accomplish anything important!" Gimli glared, "Dear, you men just can't be sated this morning can you. Fine! No one ever accomplished anything LIFE CHANGING from cooking a cleaning. You can't just believe after fifteen years of training me Gimli that I wouldn't use it." "Of course not! I only thought you'd use it to protect our home! I never expected you'd want to actually put your…" Gimli looked at the five orcs that now laid dead on the forest floor, "talents to the test on the outside world-" "Gimli!" snapped Gloin, "We cannot continue arguing here, we still have many miles to tread before we reach Rivendell. The path is too long and treacherous to allow Arathaien to travel back alone, of course with her cunning brain she'd simply wait till we were far enough away to round about and start following us again." He turned his umber eyes to Arathaien who stood silently listening to him, "You will come with us to Rivendell, but the moment I can find someone to take you back to Erebor you will be sent straight there. No complaining either!" He barked as he turned on his heels, Gimli followed quickly after his father sending the red haired maiden a smirk and a wave before they disappeared into the forest, leaving just Derin and Arathaien to themselves. "Tis nice to see ya Derin." "Likewise Lady Arathaien." The rest of the trip to Rivendell seemed to go off without any sort of hitch, and much of the chatter one could hear from the group came from Gimli and Arathaien. Gloin very likely was ready to slice his ears off from his children's' incessant talking when the large plateau seemed to open and below they could see Rivendell in all its shining glory. It was not too far away and Gloin was nearly giddy at the thought of being able to rest his aching feet for just a moment and take a break from the chatter of his son and daughter. As they made their way down the mountainside they were met by two elves, both standing tall and proud before the three exhausted elves and the curious human that stood at their side. "What business do you have in Rivendell," the one to the right spoke as his gaze seemed to slide over the group analyzing them. "I come to speak with Elrond, I wish to seek council with him. I am Gloin son of Groin, this is my son Gimli," the red bearded dwarf nodded to the elves but kept a distinctive scowl across his hard features, "our companion Derin" the younger dwarf seemed unable to move under the watchful eye of the two elves, "And…my daughter Arathaien." The dwarf lord was never quite sure how to introduce the young woman, and many times (just like this one) faltered and looked to her for her approval. Arathaien would never be ashamed though for being called the daughter of Gloin, in fact it flattered her to no end. The two elves thin eyebrows shot up their brows at this and they looked the girl over, "I'm a bit tall for my age, forgive me." Arathaien spoke innocently, feeling an elbow jab into her hip. She glanced down a Gimli who was not looking at her, but was obviously trying to repress laughter. Neither of the elves found her joke amusing, after a few more minutes of convincing the duo that they were who they said they were the group was led down to Rivendell, specifically to the house of Elrond. Arathaien had never heard of Elrond before, none of Gloin's stories included many elves, and those two elves were the first beings she had ever seen besides orcs and dwarves. The features of the elves seemed so perfect, almost as if created by an artists brush and they spoke in an almost lyrical way. They were most definitely beautiful to look at and Arathaien couldn't help but continue to gaze at the lithe frames as they entered through a wide archway. Were they male? Or were these creatures female? By their faces Arathaien would no be able to tell but with their broad shoulders and flat chests the young warrior could only assume they were male. "Welcome to the House of Elrond," one of the elves spoke motioning them inside the quarters of the large building. Arathaiens coal gaze continued its frenzy about the beautiful architecture, particularly the patterns that were enlaid into the borders of the walls. "Sir, if you would follow us we shall guide you to Elrond," Gloin grumbled in distaste wishing for a moments rest but quickly latched his hand to his sons arm, who in turn grabbed Derin. Who, if he was paying any attention to what was going on would've grabbed the crimson haired maiden but he was too busy being dragged away with his companions to do so. So without any knowledge of their departure Arathaien continued to walk along the hallways. It was a curse really, Arathaien became too enthralled and absorbed into her own thoughts. She often forgot was going on around her, which would often lead to her injury in training with Gimli. Chewing on the inside of her cheek she let a pale hand skim over the slick stone, 'I've never seen something so…' she really couldn't think of a good word. The interior of the building just seemed to flow like ripples of water when one would drop a stone. All the colors were light and neutral, much unlike the small dark homes of the dwarves and Arathaien could not decide which one she liked better. Her claymore clinked against her back in its sheath as she continued to walk down the great hallway, her leather boots tapping gently on the marbles floor. "Gimli, what-" She turned and her mouth pressed into a thin line realizing she was alone. "Curses." She felt her stomach sink as she attempted to retrace her steps back to where her company had been but every turn she took it seemed she got farther and more tangled into the mess off halls and doorways. A string of dwarvish curses danced threw pale pink lips, she needed to put a bell around all of their necks just to keep up with them! The young woman would never admit this, but she had gotten a bit lost the first few days she had followed behind the group for the very reason she had lost them now! Biting back a groan after another few steps she stopped where she was and looked out one of the many opening in the wall that acted as a window, and looked out to the other side of the home. She walked up to it and leaned her forearms onto the flat edge of the arch and leaned out feeling a cool breeze pass threw. She thought back to that moment when she had left her nanny, the fear she had felt. The excitement. For the past twenty eight years Arathaien had dreamed of the time when she would leave the safety of Erebor and venture off on her own, to have her own real adventures outside the watchful eye of Gloin and Gimli. Maybe even, to find out what and who she truly was. The only details she was ever given about before she was given to the dwarves was that her mother was named Poppy and she lived in a village close to Gondor. Arathaien had anticipated going to the land of Men and meeting others like herself, other humans. Did they all have red hair like her? Did they all stand tall or were some short, Arathaien wasn't sure. But her real goal was to find her mother, if she was still alive. A cough took Arathaien from her thoughts and she flinched a bit feeling her back go stiff. Her face turned to the cough to see a lanky male standing a few inches taller then herself staring at her. A bit rattled she gave a nervous laugh, "Sorry, I did not realize I you were there," she remarked as she stood back up to her full height, "I got lost, clumsy me, and I was wondering if you could help me find my way to my friends. They are speaking with Elrond." She was polite and courteous, if her nanny could hear her now she might faint. She held back a grin as the man nodded, "Yes I can, I as well am seeking Elrond. But I believe I know where he is…" he spoke almost in a whispery way and Arathaien strained her ears to hear him, "Come with me," he motioned with a large hand to follow him and the pale woman obeyed. His hands didn't seem to fit his tall frame at all, they were so much larger, with long muscular fingers that looked rough to touch. The males face wasn't…unattractive to say the least. He was pale, but unlike the peachy tint Arathaiens' had his looked almost a bit sickly. The female warrior could only come to the conclusion he was not eating correctly for his strong jaw law and broad back and chest proved him to be a fighter. He had wavy black hair cut just about his shoulders, and it seemed to be sticking together with mud and oil to look like a tangled mess in the back. He wore a large black cloak and black leather riding boots, he seemed almost like a living shadow. Except…shadows didn't smell like they had not bathed in weeks. Of course, Arathaien really couldn't say she smelled like a bucket of daisies. She too had been traveling long, and perhaps she had just gotten use to the smell. She could feel the oil that clung to her own face and the dirt that stained her arms and neck. Her hair was at the ends and she knew she would need to cut it, it was far to clumped to comb and wash thoroughly. Her lips pressed together as she leaned her face down to her shoulder and sniffed, she grimaced. 'WHAT IN THE WORLD HAVE I BEEN ROLLING-' "Milady, I do not believe I caught your name." The male ahead of her inquired, tilting his head back almost catching her in the act of smelling her stink. "Oh, I am Arathaien daughter of Gloin." "You do not look like a dwarf to me." He mused as he slowed down a bit to walk beside her. "Well lad," the man laughed at this, "I'm just special I suppose." She waved her hand dismissively trying to find a different subject to talk about with his male. "I am most certainly not a 'lad'." The dark-haired shadow spoke with a bemused smile across his face, now that Arathaien got a better look at him he looked much older then she. He had wrinkles around the edge of his eyes and the dark misty orbs that looked down at her seemed to have seen much more then she had in her years. Well, most ten year old had seen more of the world then she had. His dark hair did have hints of grey in the roots. Arathaien smiled back at him, "Well you have not told me your name sir," She said poking him in the arm like she'd do with Gimli, "Aragorn. Some call me Strider." "Hn, I myself like the sound of Aragorn much better then…what did you say? 'Strider?'." She mused, really without thinking. "I do too." After a few more minutes of conversing they finally reached wooden double doors that were closed tight. Arathaien look at the doors in a curious manner before glancing up at Aragorn to realize this was where Gloin, Gimli, and Derin were. She went to thank him when the door burst open and three grumpy looking, okay two…Derin looked terrified as always, dwarfs came threw the doorway and stopped in front of Arathaien and her new companion. "We cannot wait! Why does he make us wait?" Gimli complained only just realizing the crimson haired warrior was before him, "Ah! Lass! We've been wonderin' where you've been off to! Made a new friend I see!" Gimli smiled and looked up at Aragon with a studying eye, "You are as observant as ever friend," she smirked, "This is Aragorn, he escorted me here. By the way, thank you so much for leavin' me!" she growled and glared at her friend Derin who raised his hands up to defend himself. "They took me by surprise! I couldn't think!" Derin whimpered and Arathaien sighed dramatically, a hint of a smile still on her lips. "Oh well, no harm done I suppose." She glanced to Aragorn again and nodded her head to him, "Thank you Aragorn, I am forever in your debt for leading me out of this labyrinth." "Pleasure was all mine." Aragorn returned the nod before entering the chambers where Elrond resided, shutting the doors quietly behind him. Arathaien sighed and looked to her three companions to see they were all looking at her. "What?" she asked, her brow furrowing. "'I am forever in your debt,'" Gimli mocked Arathaien in a high pitched voice, obviously but horribly trying to imitate the young womans voice. "'The pleasure is all my'" Gloin grasped his sons hands and lifted his leg and sighed dreamily and Arathaien rolled her onyx eyes at their attempt to embarrass her. "Now all the times I've tried to introduce you to a nice dwarf boy you act so cold, but suddenly some man comes riddin' to your rescue and you welcome him with open arms? Now I don't see the fairness in that!" Gloin pouted a bit and the crimson haired warrior laughed, "I did not welcome him with open arms! Nor was I flirting as you two seem to believe. I was trying to be polite!" she remarked the last statement and Gimli let a burst of air escape his lips, "Sure you were lass," he grumbled. Arathaien was about to argue further when she realized this was the most trivial thing to be discussing right that instant. "So, how was the meeting with Elrond?" She asked Gloin whose frown deepened at being reminded, "It did not happen. He told us we must wait for the others…what others is he waiting for?" He asked rhetorically, "Elrond offered us rooms to stay in till the rest of this so call company arrives. We may be here for longer then expected…" Arathaien inwardly rejoiced at this. "Arathaien, I meant 'we' as in myself, Gimli, and Derin. Not you. In a few days YOU will be going back to Erebor." Arathaien protested, "I said no complaining didn't I? You've had your fun, but I will expect to see you ready to leave in a few days is that understood lass?" Arathaien wanted to hang her head in defeat but she kept her chin high and sighed. "Lass…" "Yes Gloin." She grumbled.
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